dunno what to call this - Metal-R.US

Pelican

"Stacking up points for conspiring against them
why was it thought that neglect would make this better?
felt so compelled with a mind full of rot
destruction of the paths that were bridged from me to god
the once pure thoughts were then tainted by suggestion
poisoned by ideals that would break this relation

the stars behind his eyes flicker out with contempt
surveying this moment for the weakness of men
plagued by the thought of guilt and betrayal
now picking things up at a pace of a snail
left of the chest is a strong sense of teeth marks
round on her back are the knife wounds in the heart
with the bombshell dropped and rubbed in the face
where now from here alone and disgraced?"

something i wrote while trying to sleep last night, its still a work in progress and i'm not sure if its any good
need to add a lot more because this will all be said really quickly

Flagellant

Call it "Evidently Chickentown Part Deux"

the bloody cops are bloody keen
to bloody keep it bloody clean
the bloody chief's a bloody swine
who bloody draws a bloody line
at bloody fun and bloody games
the bloody kids he bloody blames
are nowhere to be bloody found
anywhere in chicken town

the bloody scene is bloody sad
the bloody news is bloody bad
the bloody weed is bloody turf
the bloody speed is bloody surf
the bloody folks are bloody daft
don't make me bloody laugh
it bloody hurts to look around
everywhere in chicken town
the bloody train is bloody late
you bloody wait you bloody wait
you're bloody lost and bloody found
stuck in fucking chicken town

the bloody view is bloody vile
for bloody miles and bloody miles
the bloody babies bloody cry
the bloody flowers bloody die
the bloody food is bloody muck
the bloody drains are bloody fucked
the color scheme is bloody brown
everywhere in chicken town

the bloody pubs are bloody dull
the bloody clubs are bloody full
of bloody girls and bloody guys
with bloody murder in their eyes
a bloody bloke is bloody stabbed
waiting for a bloody cab
you bloody stay at bloody home
the bloody neighbors bloody moan
keep the bloody racket down
this is bloody chicken town

the bloody pies are bloody old
the bloody chips are bloody cold
the bloody beer is bloody flat
the bloody flats have bloody rats
the bloody clocks are bloody wrong
the bloody days are bloody long
it bloody gets you bloody down
evidently chicken town
the bloody train is bloody late
you bloody wait you bloody wait
you're bloody lost and bloody found
stuck in fucking chicken town

British Poetry=FTW

Pelican

right
thanks for that

Pelican Tea Snob Moderator MRU Donor Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: England, not Britain Posts: 5,459 Images: 49 Horns up: 365 Horns up 293 times in 214 posts	dunno what to call this "Stacking up points for conspiring against them why was it thought that neglect would make this better? felt so compelled with a mind full of rot destruction of the paths that were bridged from me to god the once pure thoughts were then tainted by suggestion poisoned by ideals that would break this relation the stars behind his eyes flicker out with contempt surveying this moment for the weakness of men plagued by the thought of guilt and betrayal now picking things up at a pace of a snail left of the chest is a strong sense of teeth marks round on her back are the knife wounds in the heart with the bombshell dropped and rubbed in the face where now from here alone and disgraced?" something i wrote while trying to sleep last night, its still a work in progress and i'm not sure if its any good need to add a lot more because this will all be said really quickly
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Flagellant Lingual Manifestant Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Los Angeles, CA Posts: 449 Images: 7 Horns up: 32 Horns up 48 times in 38 posts	Call it "Evidently Chickentown Part Deux" the bloody cops are bloody keen to bloody keep it bloody clean the bloody chief's a bloody swine who bloody draws a bloody line at bloody fun and bloody games the bloody kids he bloody blames are nowhere to be bloody found anywhere in chicken town the bloody scene is bloody sad the bloody news is bloody bad the bloody weed is bloody turf the bloody speed is bloody surf the bloody folks are bloody daft don't make me bloody laugh it bloody hurts to look around everywhere in chicken town the bloody train is bloody late you bloody wait you bloody wait you're bloody lost and bloody found stuck in fucking chicken town the bloody view is bloody vile for bloody miles and bloody miles the bloody babies bloody cry the bloody flowers bloody die the bloody food is bloody muck the bloody drains are bloody fucked the color scheme is bloody brown everywhere in chicken town the bloody pubs are bloody dull the bloody clubs are bloody full of bloody girls and bloody guys with bloody murder in their eyes a bloody bloke is bloody stabbed waiting for a bloody cab you bloody stay at bloody home the bloody neighbors bloody moan keep the bloody racket down this is bloody chicken town the bloody pies are bloody old the bloody chips are bloody cold the bloody beer is bloody flat the bloody flats have bloody rats the bloody clocks are bloody wrong the bloody days are bloody long it bloody gets you bloody down evidently chicken town the bloody train is bloody late you bloody wait you bloody wait you're bloody lost and bloody found stuck in fucking chicken town British Poetry=FTW
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